Flight Path Story Diagnostic

$300.00

A big picture assessment of your draft that identifies what is working, what may need attention and where to focus your revision energy.

Includes:

  • a review of up to 10,000 words

  • a four to six page editorial letter

  • feedback on structure, character, pacing, stakes, point of view, theme, and reader experience.

  • a prioritized revision path.

  • an optional 30 minute follow up conversation.

Please note: This is a diagnostic rather than a full developmental edit. It does not include line-by-line comments, copyediting, proofreading, formatting, or publishing support.

A big picture assessment of your draft that identifies what is working, what may need attention and where to focus your revision energy.

Includes:

  • a review of up to 10,000 words

  • a four to six page editorial letter

  • feedback on structure, character, pacing, stakes, point of view, theme, and reader experience.

  • a prioritized revision path.

  • an optional 30 minute follow up conversation.

Please note: This is a diagnostic rather than a full developmental edit. It does not include line-by-line comments, copyediting, proofreading, formatting, or publishing support.