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Story support for writers who feel close, tangled, or unsure what the next draft needs.
Moon Moth Magic helps fiction writers find clarity in their drafts through big-picture manuscript feedback, story coaching, revision planning, and gentle-but-useful accountability.
Introductory Offers and Packages
A 60-minute story clarity session.
Best for: Writers who feel stuck, tangled, overwhelmed or unsure what the story needs next.
Includes:
Intake Form
60-minute call
3-5 next action steps
Short email summary.
Be aware: This does not include any reading of your work. This is a consultation only.
A focused 60-minute story clarity session for writers who need help finding the next right step.
Partial manuscript feedback
Best for: Writers who want big-picture feedback on a chapter, opening, short story, or partial draft.
Includes:
Up to 10,000 words
4–6 page editorial letter
Notes on structure, character, pacing, stakes, POV, theme, and reader experience
Revision priority list
Optional 30-minute follow-up during launch period
A big-picture manuscript diagnostic for writers who want to know what is working, what feels tangled, and what to revise next.
Four-session coaching package
Best for: Writers who need guided support, accountability, and help moving through a draft or revision.
Includes:
Four 60-minute coaching sessions
Goal-setting and revision planning
Up to 30 pages reviewed total across the package
Between-session check-in by email or form
Final next-step plan
Four sessions of story support, revision planning, accountability, and targeted feedback for writers who want a guide beside them.
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